Final Crit Feedback - Mail Shot

For the final crit of our mail shots, we had another silent crit, but this time in a group of 2 so we could discuss our thoughts and come up with something more rounded. 

For this Crit I was not really expecting much positive feedback, and the criticism I got I feel was quite fair. 

Some of the points raised were

• Too small 
• Doesn't give away what profession I am
• They preferred the House envelope idea because they felt it linked better.

Whilst I think the points raised are fair, I don't know that I have enough time to go back and alter these things because I don't want what happened last week to happen again, particularly so close to the deadline.