D&AD Ammendments

The crit for the rain posters was really useful, and I got some very constructive feedback to help me tweak my poster designs.

Positives - 

Strong illustration

Good concept

Colours work well

Criticisms - 

The Hanna Barbera style illustration is very americanised...would people be able to recognise that it was a poster that represented brits?

Too much text, needs to simplified so that it fits more with Erik Kessels concept led style.  

Think also about the text hierarchy