Crit Feedback

After presenting to Amber and Jo for our final crit, we were told that whilst the overall concept, theme and tumblr page worked really well, there were a few tweaks we needed to make to our designs to enhance them, and make them feel more consistent and cohesive, so that they all ensured that it felt like we were promoting the same thing.
Joel is going to create a leaflet instead of the booklet, as it will have a more immediate impact than a booklet. We are also printing some stickers instead of using post it notes as it is more practical and easier to transfer around college. The poster's colour also needed brightening to fit in with the colour palette more.

These are the tweaked designs.